I have, unabashed, soared,
from underneath a stifled dream,
I was, as in, repressed, by ’em,
and a lore of life hidden in me.
and now as i walk among,
a breeze that comes with,
brings a halcyon memory forth,
for a life that lies beckoning.
of the many colors that remain
untasted through my days,
in my land i will,
a brief affair, with the strange.
I will, oh certainly do,
see ’em all, drink and taste.
pleasures of the vim,
oh come along, define your life.
and when the wind hit,
as it took away my repose,
or so i thought, I veered,
from a path, of inertia and torpor.
of that scraggly life that i led,
i forget, and i think, and i think,
this new freedom biting its way in,
the devil in me laughed.
I shall, through and through pass,
culling, for life throws ’em aplenty,
affluence seeking its way home,
this myriad mind of mine.
_____________________________________________________________________________
is my contribution to Jingle’s Thursday Poets Rally Week 31
keep flying,
u r blessed!
🙂
Thank you Jingle!!! 🙂
Happy Monday,
5 awards 4 u, enjoy!
simply open a page titled awards, display them, feel proud…
the first 3 awards are not to be passed on,
Will do 🙂
Thanks an infinite times for so much appreciation 🙂
Happy week 🙂
Great poem. Something you can really relate to. Keep up the good job.
thank you very much. 🙂
Rally week 28 will be on September 9,
welcome then
awards for you,
check out other stuff there. it is an old post, u may already saw it, but in case you did not know, welcome to explore…
😉
this is a wonderful poem.
Excellent job
Thank you 🙂
Thursday Poets Rally Week 31 (October 21-27) | Jingle
Agreement 4 Thursday Poets Rally Week 31 | Promising Poets' Parking Lot
beautiful dove,
love the sentiments in your words…
lovely contribution.
Thanks for sharing…
xx
As always Jingle, as always.
Thank you. 😀
That was really a beautiful poem. Really touching.
Thank you
Thank you very much!
this is a beautiful layout: the image, the structure, … all seem to reinforce your theme. and “halcyon”…. i love that word 🙂
awesome word isn’t it “halcyon” 😀
Thank you very much!
Great!
Thank you!
the image in the post and the flight’s difficulty too was well portrayed.. liked this, Jargnar!
My Rally Post is here:
http://leonnyes.wordpress.com/2010/10/21/nine-hundred/
Thanks!
*checking out your link..*
Great piece, very well done! Lovely contribution to the Rally.
Thank you very much! 🙂
I know you are busy, yet, I do hope you visit poets who are here for you,
we try not to discourage poets who support and visit.
agree?
love your participation,
let me know after you finish your visiting…
Happy Tuesday!
I’ve visited a lot of people 🙂
( definitely more than 18! )
So Many New Poetry Flavors, Come To Try Them All | Promising Poets' Parking Lot